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Good news the new glass scale reads the same as my older plastic scale that flexed when stood on, not safe.
I am going to write a few lines of poetry on all my postings, this is the first.
Back to yesterday,
Looking not so far in my past,
You may quite possibly see
screams of a child, lonely, lost and sad
... kidnapped
Yet somehow he too was seeking
Looking ahead to this now me
One of hope, always hope, as hope has to be
Sometimes I fail this side of me
But if my past tells my future
Then indeed my future tells my past
I struggle on
© HellBentVet
12/31/2016
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125.0 kg
これまでの減量分: 3.4 kg.
残り: 29.8 kg.
ダイエット続き: まあまあ.
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週に2.5 kg減量中
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I see myself in your poem. Always hoping. Thanks for sharing :)
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: WeAreAllBeautiful
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I once wrote Sonnets and Limericks on pathetic.org. Gavin Roy terminated my membership because he got butt-hurt over some comments I made in a private message to another member of the site. Think about that, he was reading the private messages of members of the site. Yoikes! Anyway, that was like in 2006, I've thought about messaging him on facebook with a photocopy of my middle finger, but haven't given enough of a fig to go through with it. Anyway, I do appreciate verse.
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: @philrmcknight
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I like how you've exposed your inner child; the vulnerability all children have, being children.
Thank you for sharing your written Art
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: PixieGirl58
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It's beautiful, HellBent. You have a gift.
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I just love it - it speaks to me. Thanks for sharing.
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: LO-Carb Karen
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Glad you enjoy my inner voice, I will write one for each weigh in.
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: HellBentVet
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Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed it very mcuh
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: KetoWeb
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2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: John10251
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2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: ClassicRocker
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Love the poetry; will be looking forward to your daily posts just because poetry is fresh and unchartered words. Something needed in posts these days. Good luck in 2017!
2016年 12月 31日 投稿者: dixie2010
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thanks for the too kind words everyone, i just write from my heart and listen to the words of my soul.
2017年 01月 1日 投稿者: HellBentVet
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